It seems you are criticizing to the book the author quotes, not the article itself.
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Two things need to be said after reading The Anxious Generation. First, this book is going to sell a lot of copies, because Jonathan Haidt is telling a scary story about children’s development that many parents are primed to believe. Second, the book’s repeated suggestion that digital technologies are rewiring our children’s brains and causing an epidemic of mental illness is not supported by science. Worse, the bold proposal that social media is to blame might distract us from effectively responding to the real causes of the current mental-health crisis in young people
It seems you are criticizing to the book the author quotes, not the article itself. "
" - The posted article about 3 ish parographs in.
If I’m mistaken, let me know.